struggling with re-titling book I'm revising to send out to a contest, I know, why, I never win these things
but the existing titles were so bad
the poems are, in general, about how experience clothes reality / truth, and names, language, style, as part of experience, part of this scrim or veil; what is of the essense, what is revealed by the slip-page of lyricism, in these poems
no closer to a title tho
the method of the poems is Negative - Via Negativa or Apophatic -- that attempts to describe by negation, to speakonly in terms of what may not be said.
but the existing titles were so bad
the poems are, in general, about how experience clothes reality / truth, and names, language, style, as part of experience, part of this scrim or veil; what is of the essense, what is revealed by the slip-page of lyricism, in these poems
no closer to a title tho
the method of the poems is Negative - Via Negativa or Apophatic -- that attempts to describe by negation, to speakonly in terms of what may not be said.
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