struggling with re-titling book I'm revising to send out to a contest, I know, why, I never win these things
but the existing titles were so bad
the poems are, in general, about how experience clothes reality / truth, and names, language, style, as part of experience, part of this scrim or veil; what is of the essense, what is revealed by the slip-page of lyricism, in these poems
no closer to a title tho
the method of the poems is Negative - Via Negativa or Apophatic -- that attempts to describe by negation, to speakonly in terms of what may not be said.